Lost Without Him

March 7, 2010
By TryingToB BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
TryingToB BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
\"He pokes your ribs and says your thin beyond repair. You poke yourself in the ribs-all you feel is fat.\"


That I want you back. He is sweet,
Charming,
And always cheers me up.
I let him go,
And now I feel like I don’t know which way is up.
Suicide thoughts ran through my head,
But when I realized that I wanted to live,
I ended up dead.
Dead without him,
Lost without guidance.
And when I lost him,
I felt like I dived on the floor without knee pads,
Like rubbing my skin raw with easers.
The burning sensation still stinging.
Going into a world unprotected is scary.
I’ve done it before,
And managed to survive for some time.
But now,
I feel as if death is about to greet me in a welcome hug.
The truth speaks louder than anything.
The truth is saying
I want you back.


The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this piece was a break up. In this poem, you can obviously tell that I wasn't over it.

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on Apr. 21 2010 at 5:41 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

honestly, that seemed a little dark o.O but it was still veryy well written. srry bout the break up, keep ur chin up:) idk how long ago this was but yeah.


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