March 6, 2010
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Not in cruelty,
Not in wrath,
The REAPER came today;
following his grey path,
and took my love away.

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Whylime said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 3:17 pm
i kinda didnt get it... im not a very deep person... oh and your lucky.. i wish i could ski.. there's hardly any snow here.. i supose thats what happens when you live in the south...
TimBonin replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 6:52 pm
Skiing. Its fun. Im trying to put it in a way thats not rubbing it in your face... wait that came out wrong. as for the poem: Ya, it sort of has a deeper meaning then most poems and that is what i like about it
Danielle L. said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 10:59 pm
This is a very good start of a poem...but i felt like it should have been longer. I like how its in a A,B,C,B,C format instead of typical AA,BB, know what i mean?
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