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can i trust you with my heart?


Can I trust you with my heart?
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.
I just know he is here for me.
And I know I love him.
But the question is does he love me too?
I just hope he does, because I don’t know what I would do without him.
I need him.
But can I trust him with my heart this time?
I live through these rough days!
He says he won’t hurt me but can I believe him?
Can I trust his word?
I hope I can because there is not much of my heart left.
But yet again he lets me down!
So now I live in this world without a heart because he took the last of it with him.
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.




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xxbabiigurlxx said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 2:24 pm:
i dont know why you put anonymous. you should be proud of this!
 
Mandi C. replied...
May 9, 2010 at 11:52 am :
ya i will look at some of ur work n comment for you lol!!!!  
 
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h2obamboo said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 12:41 pm:

I really can relate to this and i like it ALOT!!!!

Good Job!

 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:55 am :
thanks it happened to me like 4 times so i write about things like this but i try not to tell people that the peom is about me!!!
 
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Patience97 said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 7:49 am:
Great job Christina! That is really nice, I used to like someone like this, but I don't anymore. Why? Because he let me down, he wasn't nearly as nice as I thought he was and I realized, that's just not the kind of person I want in my life...
 
Mandi C. replied...
May 9, 2010 at 11:54 am :
thanks for commenting n ya same here thats what happened to me like four times it seems like i dnt make mistakes i just date them but im done doin that so now im waiting for the right guy to come along.......
 
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Nkeeyah said...
Apr. 17, 2010 at 8:31 pm:
This is great!!! I relate to it
 
Mandi C. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 3:58 pm :
thanks n ya guys dont know that they are hurting you until you finally break down and cry!!!!
 
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pepsilover said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 8:54 pm:
I Really like this keep writing i can def. relatE!!! wish i could write like that! :) check out my stuff i would really apprechiate it!
 
Mandi C. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 3:57 pm :
thanks n i will read some of ur stuff!!! :)
 
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Whisperer said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 5:33 pm:

this is really good. i can kinda relate because i don't know if i can trust this one person. but i keep on doing it. so thank you:)

check out my stuff if you like

 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 4:15 pm :
thanks n i will do that n yea idk if i can trust this one person but i will anyways cuz i love him too much!!!
 
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