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can i trust you with my heart?


Can I trust you with my heart?
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.
I just know he is here for me.
And I know I love him.
But the question is does he love me too?
I just hope he does, because I don’t know what I would do without him.
I need him.
But can I trust him with my heart this time?
I live through these rough days!
He says he won’t hurt me but can I believe him?
Can I trust his word?
I hope I can because there is not much of my heart left.
But yet again he lets me down!
So now I live in this world without a heart because he took the last of it with him.
I live through these rough days!
Not knowing how to get through them.




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kelsey2097 said...
Apr. 24, 2011 at 9:10 pm:
this is so true! </3
 
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always-sunshine said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 9:42 am:
this is amazing i really do like it
 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am :
thanks :) check out my other work if you want!!!
 
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AsmeraAdalia said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 9:50 pm:

"I hate that He lets me down, yet I cannot cut short my love for Him...He drags me down, yet I still clutch at the belief that somehow I can pull Him up to me..." -Mareena

my life quote, that is reflected in this poem, and i love you for this

 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:51 am :
thanks i try but i dont think its really that good cause normally people are just like" get over it he dont like you" but its hard for me so i write these peoms about relationships.
 
AsmeraAdalia replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 4:10 pm :
I haven't gotten over him yet either...yet he is currently with my best friend and I cant hate either of them for it I love them both too much
 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 4:16 pm :
ya i kno how that feels but did he ever give u a chance? if u dnt mind me asking....i'm here if u want to talk bout love problems even tho i dont kno u i like giving people advice!!
 
GrishkoPrincess replied...
May 19, 2010 at 9:28 pm :
ya we went out...for a week with barely seeing each other...then he lied and said his mom didnt want him to date me and broke up wit me
 
Mandi C. replied...
May 20, 2010 at 4:05 pm :
oohh i'm srry to hear that!!!! ya i been cheated on 4 times!! :(
 
GrishkoPrincess replied...
May 22, 2010 at 11:56 am :
it sucks when you cant hate them for it doesn't it?
 
Mandi C. replied...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 8:34 pm :
ya it does suck cuz for some reason i still love that person n i always will even hough he hurt me so many times!!! :(
 
GrishkoPrincess replied...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 11:36 am :
it really does...
 
Mandi C. replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 2:55 pm :
ya but now i just found out he is moving and i will never tell him how much i really love him!!!! even though he hurt!!! i still care!! :(
 
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Starfire said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 4:35 pm:
Wow this is a very nice poem. I can totaly relate to it. Hey did this really happen to you or just a random poem idea? *if you don't mind my asking*
 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:49 am :
thanks n ya it did happen to me like 4 times but i just cant stop thinking about this one guy!! :)
 
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Sorcha_vampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 12:33 pm:
Feel proud of your work here. This is excelent. Don't be ashamed of your darkest moments. I love this. Continue.
 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:53 am :
thanks n im not really ashamed of my work but some people just don't understand why i write things like this....but i write them cause i have been heart broken like 4 times all ready
 
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xxbabiigurlxx said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 2:24 pm:
i dont know why you put anonymous. you should be proud of this!
 
Mandi C. replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:54 am :
i am proud of my work i just don't know how to change that!! sorry... n thanks
 
xxbabiigurlxx replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 8:33 pm :
you're very welcome
 
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