My Pain | Teen Ink

My Pain

March 23, 2010
By Kibitzer101 SILVER, Leland, North Carolina
Kibitzer101 SILVER, Leland, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is always something and something is always nothing."
"Fate is Hate, Love is cruel, but Happiness is everlasting."


Waiting for my soul to take,
Her pain away from me,
So I could say.
That you saw the pain
hidden in my eyes.
As we said our goodbyes.
I didn't want to let you
Go, So.
Why don't you turn around and look at me.
I am the same as I used to be
Now look at yourself looking the same way back when you loved me.


The author's comments:
"A poem that I wrote many years ago and has been engraved into my soul."

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Apr. 19 2010 at 8:50 am
thank you for talking you time to reading my poem

on Apr. 17 2010 at 5:32 pm
lifeisajourney GOLD, Coronado, California
18 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is a journey not a destination..."
"Perhaps our eyes need to be washed by our tears once in a while, so that we can see life in a clearer view again."
"Only those who will go too far, can possibly find out how far one can go"

This is really deep i like it a lot. Keep writing