I'm Not That Girl

March 23, 2010
By Sara-Lynn SILVER, Gouldsboro, Maine
Sara-Lynn SILVER, Gouldsboro, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"There are no such thing as good girls gone bad, just bad girls found out"


You tore me apart,
shattered my self-esteem,
you built me up,
only to knock me back down.
I'm on my knees,
begging your forgiveness.
The blue of your eyes,
cuts like a knife,
you want me to love you,
you want me to care,
you want me to help,
but I don't know how.
There's no way to stop this,
nothing I can do to make you happy.
I'm not the girl for you.
You do not need me like you said.
I'm not the girl for you.
You love somebody else.
I'm not that girl,...
She's got her blonde hair,
her knowing eyes,
and gentle touch.
She's got your sweater,
draped around her shoulders.
She's got the you that I wanted,
the you that I needed.
But there's nothing left for us,
we will never be.
I'm not the girl for you...
I could never be like her...
And what hurts the most...
I'm her best friend.

The author's comments:
I wrote this the other night, I don't know why really, but it just came out. I love my best friend, and I'm sooo happy that she's happy :) we are both with the ones we love so it's all good ^^

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on Jun. 4 2010 at 7:06 am
Sara-Lynn SILVER, Gouldsboro, Maine
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are no such thing as good girls gone bad, just bad girls found out"

yeah, this was just something random. Whatever popped into my head when I found out they were together I just wrote down. :P but it's all good =] An I will let you know about the getting to know me part ^_^

MJ_reverse said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 12:26 am

It sounds like you really liked this kid... But you said that you're both with the ones you love, so if you don't love this kid, I'd stop complaining =\

I know it sounds mean, but it almost sounds like you gave him up. If that's the case, that would be why he moved on. You said 'you do not me me like you said.' That tells me that he really did like you and that would be why he moved on. He doesn't want to admit that maybe he was wrong. He needs to grow a pair and get over it.

Shattered your self-esteem... does that mean that he made fun of you? or talked about you behind his back? If he really loved you he wouldn't of done that. Maybe it's best that you just move on to the one you're with right now ^_^

Now that I think about it it almost sounds like you left him for someone else. and you're complaining about him being with someone else? you might need to calm down just a little bit there.

I hope that you're not as I assume. I wish you the best =]

P.S. - if you're not with that guy anymore, I'd like to get to know you some: jay_mich192@yahoo ;)





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