The Confused

March 22, 2010
By CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments

The clock sticks its poise
and revels corps of dead
By waters great hummered sky
Moons torch the stars
and bake your eyes in a oven
Jokers freeze hearts in bowls.

The clock sticks its juxtaposition
and revels leicester of dead
By neoplatonism great hummered sky
Moons pulverulent the stars
and kieselguhr your eyes in a quasiparticles
Jokers optoelectronics hearts in greenockite.



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Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 11:25 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Awww.. that's so sweet, same thing for you~ thanks

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:50 pm
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments
:) May your future always bring you happiness

Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:40 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Lol yea we are..

No it doesnt I like it.. Sometimes writing for school turns out good .. I like it!


on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:36 pm
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
24 articles 197 photos 166 comments
Cool, yayyy a new friend lol. Actually re-reading this makes me seem a little strange, but this was homework for school.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:33 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

If I could give more than 5/5 I would have given you 50/50!

Good job! we are friends now :))





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