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Victim

Hidden in the darkness
Heart as cold as ice
Waiting for a hero
Everything has its price

Rejected by society
Victim of their hate
Far beyond their mercy
Kindness comes too late



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yes_i_am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 7:38 am:
u r lethal with words...very simple but soulful poetry..which is the way  it should be
 
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PrincessPineapple said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:07 pm:
this is good!
 
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KosuKovu13 said...
May 31, 2010 at 7:44 pm:
It definitely desribes the point of view as being the "victim" of any situation. Very good, very detailed. I like it.
 
Supernova7 replied...
May 31, 2010 at 8:24 pm :
thanks everyone:)                      
 
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JoetheBlanc said...
May 25, 2010 at 9:32 am:
wow. very amazing. you are definitely a wordsmith! 
 
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JacobC said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:28 am:
Once again, great job.  I like your style.
 
Supernova7 replied...
May 23, 2010 at 7:14 pm :
thank you:)                                            
 
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PoeticJustice96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:47 am:
I love this poem its amazing great work!!
 
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LostAngel said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 12:46 pm:
again, I love love love itttt
 
Supernova7 replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 11:22 pm :
Thank you:)
 
MadAsAHatter... replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:27 pm :
So true. WE let others slip past our grasp drowning in their sorrow, dying by their hurt.
 
mee-mee replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 12:35 pm :

woah ! i really love this poem . its short and straight to the point .

keep writing this is your gift .

 
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