Victim

By Supernova7, Redford, TX

Hidden in the darkness
Heart as cold as ice
Waiting for a hero
Everything has its price

Rejected by society
Victim of their hate
Far beyond their mercy
Kindness comes too late

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yes_i_am said...
Jul. 16, 2010 at 7:38 am:

u r lethal with words...very simple but soulful poetry..which is the way it should be

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PrincessPineapple said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:07 pm:

this is good!

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KosuKovu13 said...
May 31, 2010 at 7:44 pm:

It definitely desribes the point of view as being the "victim" of any situation. Very good, very detailed. I like it.

Supernova7 replied...
May 31, 2010 at 8:24 pm :

thanks everyone:)

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JoetheBlanc said...
May 25, 2010 at 9:32 am:

wow. very amazing. you are definitely a wordsmith!

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JacobC said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:28 am:

Once again, great job. I like your style.

Supernova7 replied...
May 23, 2010 at 7:14 pm :

thank you:)

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PoeticJustice96 said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:47 am:

I love this poem its amazing great work!!

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LostAngel said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 12:46 pm:

again, I love love love itttt

Supernova7 replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 11:22 pm :

Thank you:)

MadAsAHatter... replied...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 12:27 pm :

So true. WE let others slip past our grasp drowning in their sorrow, dying by their hurt.

mee-mee replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 12:35 pm :

woah ! i really love this poem . its short and straight to the point .

keep writing this is your gift .

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