The One I Miss

March 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


There are times I miss your voice
All the things you used to say
I wonder if you meant it
Before you walked away

I miss your arms around me
As I dozed in your embrace
I miss seeing the smile
That would light up your face

I miss your lips on mine
So much love in that first kiss
I cannot settle for another
For it is you I miss


The author's comments:
This is one of the many poems I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me.

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on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:06 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you both very much it means alot to me

on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:42 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

this is sad :/ breakups are hard...still getting over mine...:( This is a great poem I think everyone on this planet can relate to it :) good job!

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:39 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

awww first kiss! im sorry u guys broke up :/ im missing someone a lot too. just remember the memories and never lose them :)

on Aug. 13 2010 at 8:34 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:51 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 475 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

First love, so sweet. :)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:32 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you so much for commenting everyone:)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:18 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww oh my, this was outstanding. i loved the rhyming-ness and the word choice.. good job! ur a greatt writer :)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:16 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 534 comments

Wow. Very classical style, always a good thing. 

Great job with the rhyming. The order of words was good, too. 

It's also where a lot of us have been, just wondering. I think this is great. 


on Jul. 21 2010 at 1:20 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you dreamer:)

 


on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:43 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 431 comments

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Part of the J7X team. :)

Great job expressing yourself! I can tell this came from the heart. :)

on Jun. 30 2010 at 2:11 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I know you won't:)

on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:44 am
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
33 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

I won't be this guy. 5 stars =)

on Jun. 22 2010 at 8:43 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

sam013 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 12:17 pm
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Great! really shows emotion. good work :)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:26 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you I'm glad you understand:)

on May. 25 2010 at 10:10 am
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

wow, another perfect poem! i see no grammatical or rhythmical errors... and all of that besides, this speaks alot to me. when you break up, your heart still loves. every person you kiss becomes a part of you, no matter how small. 

on May. 23 2010 at 12:11 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank u:)       

JacobC GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:27 am
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
10 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no." -Anonymous

Great.  I gave it 5 stars.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:21 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx Lostangel:)

on Apr. 27 2010 at 11:21 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)


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