The One I Miss

March 22, 2010
There are times I miss your voice
All the things you used to say
I wonder if you meant it
Before you walked away

I miss your arms around me
As I dozed in your embrace
I miss seeing the smile
That would light up your face

I miss your lips on mine
So much love in that first kiss
I cannot settle for another
For it is you I miss

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Supernova7 said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 10:06 pm
Thank you both very much it means alot to me
kmarie14 said...
Oct. 18, 2010 at 9:42 pm
this is sad :/ breakups are hard...still getting over mine...:( This is a great poem I think everyone on this planet can relate to it :) good job!
SamiLynn said...
Sept. 19, 2010 at 11:39 pm
awww first kiss! im sorry u guys broke up :/ im missing someone a lot too. just remember the memories and never lose them :)
Supernova7 said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 8:34 am
Thank you:)
mudpuppy said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 6:51 pm
First love, so sweet. :)
Supernova7 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:32 pm
Thank you so much for commenting everyone:)
just.me_899 said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 10:18 pm
aww oh my, this was outstanding. i loved the rhyming-ness and the word choice.. good job! ur a greatt writer :)
AprilNeon said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 10:16 pm

Wow. Very classical style, always a good thing. 

Great job with the rhyming. The order of words was good, too. 

It's also where a lot of us have been, just wondering. I think this is great. 

A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 4:43 pm
Great job expressing yourself! I can tell this came from the heart. :)
Supernova7 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 1:20 am

Thank you dreamer:)


sam013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 12:17 pm
Great! really shows emotion. good work :)
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:43 pm
Thank you:)
JoetheBlanc said...
May 25, 2010 at 10:10 am
wow, another perfect poem! i see no grammatical or rhythmical errors... and all of that besides, this speaks alot to me. when you break up, your heart still loves. every person you kiss becomes a part of you, no matter how small. 
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:26 pm
Thank you I'm glad you understand:)
JacobC said...
May 21, 2010 at 6:27 am
Great.  I gave it 5 stars.
Supernova7 replied...
May 23, 2010 at 12:11 pm
Thank u:)       
PoeticJustice96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 9:49 am
i loved it i know a lot of people can relate
Supernova7 replied...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 11:21 pm
Thank you:)
Supernova7 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 10:32 am
Please comment any advice is welcome:)
salamander254 replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 11:28 am
I liked it, very concise
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