March 22, 2010
By bdawwg05 SILVER, Hoosick Falls, New York
bdawwg05 SILVER, Hoosick Falls, New York
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sitting in my room, lights out
hearing nothing but rain
no where to go
just sit there, bored, blood flowing through my vein.
Alone in my bed
so silently I lie
with thoughts through my head
so strong, I could cry.
The clouds, the stars
that sudden remark
through that atmosphere, so far
with nothing, pitch dark.
So I lie there, falling asleep
One sudden noise swept, my final weep.

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bdawwg05 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 5:37 pm
thanks. I love writing poetry

on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:22 am
effortlesslove BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who can sing the song in your heart when you have forgotten the words"i

This is very deep. Its so good.

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