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These feelings
They envelope me
And drag me down


Down



Down
I cannot stop this worrying
That puts me in a frown

Drowning in the silence
The emotion, the pain
What I wouldn’t give
Just to be a child again

The pain that you are causing
The suffering and despair
They slip into the darkness
And follow on from there

And when I’m all alone
I never feel as blue
As when I share the moments
I used to share with you





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RheaD.Ravenfinger This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 7:44 pm

I like your poem. I relate to it because sometimes I wish I was a kid again. Check out some of my things too! Not all of my stuff is great but I would like some peoples opinions. Thanks! :)

Keep writing!

 
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