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She’s waiting… seems like it’s been twenty hours since she pressed “Send”
She looks down at her phone. No new message. All she wants is to know that you’re alive, breathing…thinking about her. Yet still, no response.
She wonders if she should re-send the previous message. Maybe it got lost somewhere in cyber space. Didn’t make its way to you.
No. Not possible. You are definitely ignoring her. But what did she do wrong? Why is it so hard for you to text back one time, letting her know that she crossed your mind just once today.
Waiting…

Waiting…


Waiting…







…No response.





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Nolen Thornton said...
May 2, 2010 at 6:48 pm
I am completely impressed.  You have a true gift for writing.  Please continue to use it.  Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
MidnightAngel7 replied...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 8:25 pm
OMG, I LOVE this!! I can totally realte. Dang guys! lol I Love love love love this!
 
vnprice replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 8:23 pm
Thank you so much! :)
 
dreamer_believer said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 5:56 pm
oh man!! i know EXACTLY how this feels :) i love it, the emotion is totally there and i can relate. LOVE it. would you mind checking out my work "take my heart and break it"? id love your opinion on that :) keep writing...5 stars :)
 
vnprice replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 10:29 am

 Thank you so much!! Yeah, I will definitely check it out and let you know! :)

Thanks again! Means a lot!!

 
Hannah17 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:53 am
I have totally felt this before! 
 
vnprice replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:59 am
Omgosh girl... me too!
 
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