Text Message

March 22, 2010
By vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
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She’s waiting… seems like it’s been twenty hours since she pressed “Send”
She looks down at her phone. No new message. All she wants is to know that you’re alive, breathing…thinking about her. Yet still, no response.
She wonders if she should re-send the previous message. Maybe it got lost somewhere in cyber space. Didn’t make its way to you.
No. Not possible. You are definitely ignoring her. But what did she do wrong? Why is it so hard for you to text back one time, letting her know that she crossed your mind just once today.
Waiting…

Waiting…


Waiting…







…No response.



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vnprice BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:23 pm
vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
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Thank you so much! :)

on Aug. 7 2010 at 8:25 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

OMG, I LOVE this!! I can totally realte. Dang guys! lol I Love love love love this!

on May. 2 2010 at 6:48 pm
I am completely impressed.  You have a true gift for writing.  Please continue to use it.  Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!

vnprice BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 10:29 am
vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
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 Thank you so much!! Yeah, I will definitely check it out and let you know! :)

Thanks again! Means a lot!!


on Apr. 29 2010 at 5:56 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

oh man!! i know EXACTLY how this feels :) i love it, the emotion is totally there and i can relate. LOVE it. would you mind checking out my work "take my heart and break it"? id love your opinion on that :) keep writing...5 stars :)

vnprice BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:59 am
vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
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Omgosh girl... me too!

on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:53 am
Hannah17 BRONZE, Bogalusa, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"FEARLESS is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, FEARLESS is having fears. FEARLESS is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, FEARLESS is living in spite of those things that scare you to death." Taylor Swift

I have totally felt this before! 


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