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I'm sitting here on my bed with my guitar
Playing a song I wrote about you
1,000 miles away you're holding your guitar
Strumming in your basement studio
At this one moment, we're connected
By a song, by the blood in our veins
And unknown bond between father and daughter
Unbreakable- Not even by death





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ramberryshakes said...
Sept. 2, 2010 at 12:57 pm
beautiful job . (:
 
AngelForeverBleedingLove This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 2, 2011 at 12:16 pm

Thank you :)

-Angel

 
RedTornado said...
May 4, 2010 at 9:09 am
very good dont let him bother you
 
SavingAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 5, 2010 at 9:01 am

hey thanks. don't worry, he doesn't bother me.

-angel

 
EmoAnon replied...
May 18, 2010 at 9:53 am

Wow. This is really....just....wow.

I like it though. It's really good. I like your poetry, it really shows great emotion through a small amount of words.

 
SavingAngel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 19, 2010 at 8:55 am

Thank you, I try really hard... :)

-angel

 
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