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Damage

Poison in my veins
Damaged my love
Hate and Pain
All that remains

My heart once warm
Gone cold over time
Into pieces it was torn
Now no longer mine

I gave you the pieces that you broke
You took them
Like it was a joke
You've yet to return them
So I must hide
What I truly feel inside



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Supernova7 said...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 11:54 am
This was verygood I've been through that before. You conveyed the feeling well.
 
CodyBalls said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 1:28 pm
I like it. its different and deep and it deviates a lot from what i write. lol   I also like that i can hear the story behind the words in my head as i read it. :)
 
kenna2013 replied...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 3:57 pm
Thank you :) lol and yeah ther is a long story behind it
 
CodyBalls replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 2:24 pm
write me the story in a letter or something i wouldn't mind hearing it.
 
EmoAnon replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 12:20 pm
AWE! This is an amazing work of art. The way you can capture so many feelings inside of so few words. Simply amazing.
 
kenna2013 replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 10:22 pm
Thank you very much :)
 
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