March 21, 2010
By Yellowshine BRONZE, Pannipitiya, Other
Yellowshine BRONZE, Pannipitiya, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for the best ! =)

"What?" he cried in schocked suprise,
To the delight of those who were sstanding by.
I had revealed the dark thruth,
and ther was no going back.

He cluthced his stomach as if in pain,
His face showed all the signs.
Confused Cupid had missed his shot,
And sent an arrow to the victims gut.

In rude schock di he collapse,
Onto the waiting chair.
He closed his eyes and shook his head,
As if, he had cause for alarm!

He rose from his seat in a daze,
His cheeks still a burning beetroot red.
He gulped all his water down,
In attempt to end the flames.

He evntually di get over,
Which perhaps was,
The most schocking event in his life.

But all I know is..
"I like is a powerful phrase"
and Thruth or Dare is a dangerous game!

The author's comments:
This poem is inspired by a true incident which happend to me when I was younger.
I was asked to reveal my latest crush during a thruth or dare game at school! This resulted in a very shocked/ traumatized guy! The poem shows exactly how he reacted when the "thruth" was revealed!=P

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on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:40 pm
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Dream as though you'll live forever, live as though you'll die today."
~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

Very cute, I like it!!!


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