March 20, 2010
Stuck in a hole, I dug myself

Surrounded by all my fears

Can any one hear me I scream I shout

I'm down hear let me out

They all walk by without a clue

No one can hear me

What should I do

Day turns to night

My hope turns gray

Alone, Invisible, Scared

All I have are my thoughts

A pessimistic view of the world

Which put me here to begin with

I started to shake I started to cry

Then something caught my eye

You were with me the whole time

How could I have been so blind

Not to see the thing that means the most to me

You took my hand to show me the way out of my hole, out of my daze

You remove all the fears

Then my head starts to clear

They start to see me, I reappear

You vision for me is becoming clear

Live while you can

Cause one day it will end

I have learned this for a true friend

Who I no longer can see

But I know is always with me

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MadAsAHatter... said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 9:40 am
Wow, I love this so much. It shows how we lose sight of things sometimes but our true friends are there to pick us up and show us the way.
Ismellteenspiritandcandy said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 10:55 am
Really great poem, i like how it talks about how that certain person can dig you out of your hole, reminds me of Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson
SlamminMan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 10:52 am
this piece really stands up and slaps me in the face because i kno what you mean by i've had to grow up fast and i hope that life gets easier because i stgle but just keep writing and taking photos because this is very nice
A_Dreamer said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 9:28 am
Very powerful! It was kinda sad to read at first; it really gives me hope. :)
Secret_Love_Tells said...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 9:50 am
This is really good Krista... It kinda brought a tear to my eye... 
jonas_chic899 said...
May 4, 2010 at 5:23 pm
awww oh my God i loved this!!! its beautiful:DDDD the flow of it was great too
MentalBreakDown replied...
May 5, 2010 at 2:39 pm
   Thank you
yin_yang replied...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 11:34 am
 wow is all i can say
Jun. 3, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Thank you 
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