Is it me?

March 26, 2010
By PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."


You doubt
You hate
You criticize
You judge
Yet, You love

You love "someone"
You wish for "her"
You defend "her"
You help "her"
Yet, You like

You like me
You wish for me
You defend me
You help me
Could I be her?

I ask you
You deny it,
He asks you,
You affirm it
She asks you,
You allow it

You approach me
You take my hand
You lean in
You whisper in my ear
"I love you:

I tilt my chin up
Looking into your eyes
I can now see
You let your wall down
I can see, I am her

I lean in
I take your hair
In my hands
I gently press
My lips upon yours.


The author's comments:
This has no relation to me whatsoever but I could not pass up the chance to post this and receive feedback from "peers" all over the world. I hope you like it! Tell me what you think please!(:

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Feb. 17 2011 at 3:21 pm
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

thank you (:

on Jul. 19 2010 at 3:47 pm
Meganchristine BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can do no wrong in the eyes of a follower"

“To accomplish great things, we must not only act, but also dream; not only plan, but also believe.”

It's amazing what love can do to a person. This poem does a great job at portraying a lot of feelings




MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!