March 25, 2010
By AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Even Monkeys fall out of trees."

What I’ve become
Is something lower than a piece of scum
Full of hate
I wait.
Knock knock
I unlock the lock
He grins
And it begins
We walk
And I watch him like a hawk
Waiting for the best time
To commit the crime.
After dinner
He thinks he will become a winner
We go to a spot
And that’s when I took my shot.
I pull out the knife
Ready to end his life
I stab
And he tries to grab
But I blocked
And he looks shocked
Now dead
And fully bled
I look down at thee
Only to be filled with glee.

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on May. 12 2010 at 5:27 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

oh sure, like we've never been on trial before. this is very nice. everybody knows they can relate. 5 stars captain.

on Apr. 24 2010 at 9:02 am
BookReader BRONZE, Edinburgh, Other
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I really like this. Your really good at poetry. Amazing!

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