Utopia

March 24, 2010
By ErosMethod GOLD, Peoria, Arizona
ErosMethod GOLD, Peoria, Arizona
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I see the gray clouds clearing
And her beautiful eyes tearing
The shining sun comes out now
And I wipe the sweat from my brow

In accordance is the beauty
(ebullience, ebullience)
To be with only me
Forever, I love her

The horizon so deep
Deep in the blue sea
The orca are so free
Like I never could be
I can't get any sleep
But I don’t mean to weep

I've been dead through my prime
Until now, now it's my time
This is my lightest hour
No more reason to cower
And I appreciate the world
So much more
Than ever before
For once I'm at peace

And I feel…
(euphoria, euphoria)
Feel so good
To be alive and free
Feel so happy
To be nothing but me


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on Apr. 19 2010 at 9:48 pm
ErosMethod GOLD, Peoria, Arizona
18 articles 0 photos 8 comments
thank you so much for commenting my work, its very appreciated.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 3:32 pm
I really liked the rhyme scheme in the third quatrain: abbbaa. I've tried different rhyme schemes, but they didn't quite work out. I envy the fluidity of this.


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