Why don't you come anymore Daddy?

March 23, 2010
Those words are getting more false everytime
I love you
it doesn’t feel
like
you love me back
at all
there are no signs
except envelopes
and they are not for me
and when you used to come about 3 years ago
you gave me money
to pay for your 5 minute visits
and
you can’t buy love daddy
you can’t buy a daughter’s love
even if they’re not really
your daughter
And I told you
when I grow up
I’ll support you
and I’ll love you
but there’s no love
there’s unhappiness that I don’t feel yours
your love
and it feels like someone has died





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ELMO7 said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 7:06 pm
wow i know what u mean my dad walked out to
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Wow this is really intense. I can tell that it came straight from your heart, and that you're hurting. Very nicely-written. You have a way of portraying your emotions. check out some of my work, too if you'd like. keep writing and I hope everything works out with your dad.
 
Vivallaa replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 11:40 am
Thanks I will, he's my stepdad. I don't know my real dad. My mom walked out on my first one. 
 
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