Why don't you come anymore Daddy?

March 23, 2010
By Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
44 articles 89 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
\'Before you stalk and overrun, you can\'t devour anyone.\'


Those words are getting more false everytime
I love you
it doesn’t feel
like
you love me back
at all
there are no signs
except envelopes
and they are not for me
and when you used to come about 3 years ago
you gave me money
to pay for your 5 minute visits
and
you can’t buy love daddy
you can’t buy a daughter’s love
even if they’re not really
your daughter
And I told you
when I grow up
I’ll support you
and I’ll love you
but there’s no love
there’s unhappiness that I don’t feel yours
your love
and it feels like someone has died



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on Apr. 18 2010 at 11:40 am
Vivallaa PLATINUM, NYC, New York
44 articles 89 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
\'Before you stalk and overrun, you can\'t devour anyone.\'

Thanks I will, he's my stepdad. I don't know my real dad. My mom walked out on my first one. 

ELMO7 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 7:06 pm
ELMO7 BRONZE, Ravenna, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
TO BE OR NOT TO BE

wow i know what u mean my dad walked out to

on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:30 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

Wow this is really intense. I can tell that it came straight from your heart, and that you're hurting. Very nicely-written. You have a way of portraying your emotions. check out some of my work, too if you'd like. keep writing and I hope everything works out with your dad.


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