Why don't you come anymore Daddy?

March 23, 2010
Those words are getting more false everytime
I love you
it doesn’t feel
you love me back
at all
there are no signs
except envelopes
and they are not for me
and when you used to come about 3 years ago
you gave me money
to pay for your 5 minute visits
you can’t buy love daddy
you can’t buy a daughter’s love
even if they’re not really
your daughter
And I told you
when I grow up
I’ll support you
and I’ll love you
but there’s no love
there’s unhappiness that I don’t feel yours
your love
and it feels like someone has died

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ELMO7 said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 7:06 pm
wow i know what u mean my dad walked out to
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:30 pm
Wow this is really intense. I can tell that it came straight from your heart, and that you're hurting. Very nicely-written. You have a way of portraying your emotions. check out some of my work, too if you'd like. keep writing and I hope everything works out with your dad.
Vivallaa replied...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 11:40 am
Thanks I will, he's my stepdad. I don't know my real dad. My mom walked out on my first one. 
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