Even Though. . .

March 23, 2010
1 wrong step
And your reputation is trashed,
no one can ever forgive you, even though
we all look back

2 friends fall in love
And there friendship is never the same,
a heart is broken to pieces, even though
they both played the love game

3 lives ruined
And none of them will ever know,
this made them all stronger, even though
Even though. . .
Even though. . .

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 8:34 pm
I love so much about this poem. Firstly, I love the 1,2,3 form you set the poem in. It's really creative and adds to the meaning. Secondly, I like the ending. It's perfect for this type of poem. The way you make it trail off after "even though" it makes the reader wonder what happened and they'll want to read more. I know I do! Check out some of my work, too if you'd like. Keep writing!
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