Everlasting Cosmic Zits

April 1, 2010
By Anonymous

As I sit under the dark blanket
we call the sky.
I stare at the smooth, dark complection, sprinkled with spheres of light.
As I stare at the sky, I think.
I think of the sky,
with billions and trillions of everlasting stars,
is not that much different from us.
Like the sky, when we are young
are faces sre smooth and clean
but when we grow older
our faces are littered with zits.
Same with the sky.
During the day, the sky is clean and clear
but as the day grows older
and day turns into night
the sky is accomppinied with
everlasting cosmic zits.

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on Apr. 15 2010 at 2:05 pm
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE, Maplewood, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Shut Up and Live I am the most sexiest thing that happened to you and i know you know it.

i dont know if this makes since but you are beautiul any GODS eyes so don't worry about a thing.! DOn"t worry i am ugly as HECK!

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on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:54 am
zoltan BRONZE, Boyne City, Michigan
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i love the vivid pic's that ya set in my mind i give it two horns up!!!!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:01 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

Wow this is really good! It's a real thought-provoking poem. Are the "everlasting cosmic zits" stars in the sky? Or could they mean much more? Good poets make a reader think and that's exactly what I'm doing now. Check out some of my work if you'd like. keep writing!


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