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Journey in my mind

April 1, 2010
By Anonymous

When you're in your bed
Lying there half asleep,
I hope you're thinking of me.
Someone stole your heart,
Right from the start,
And all I can ever do...
Is look up at the stars.
I look up and see
The bright, beautiful,
Misery of sadness.
What else can I ever do?
I will always miss you.
Think of me,
On your journey through life,
While I sit here,
And think of you too. </3 :'(

© Anonymous

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xxCMMx16 said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:16 am
xxCMMx16, Saugus, Massachusetts
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nice poem.
shortiedee SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:45 am
shortiedee SILVER, Elmira, Michigan
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Aww.. I really like your poam. But kind of sad. Good job! :)
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:35 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Your a great writer! And this is a really good poem. Keep writing!
.riley.bonjour.la.freek. GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:06 pm
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Favorite Quote:
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Thanks! (:
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on Apr. 10 2010 at 5:07 pm
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I really like this poem.  It's really well written.