Journey in my mind

April 1, 2010
By Anonymous

When you're in your bed
Lying there half asleep,
I hope you're thinking of me.
Someone stole your heart,
Right from the start,
And all I can ever do...
Is look up at the stars.
I look up and see
The bright, beautiful,
Misery of sadness.
What else can I ever do?
I will always miss you.
Think of me,
On your journey through life,
While I sit here,
And think of you too. </3 :'(


The author's comments:
read between the lines and you will find the answer.

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xxCMMx16 said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:16 am
xxCMMx16, Saugus, Massachusetts
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nice poem.

on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:45 am
shortiedee SILVER, Elmira, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"they may forget what you said, but they will never forget how you made them feel.

Aww.. I really like your poam. But kind of sad. Good job! :)

on Apr. 12 2010 at 7:35 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Your a great writer! And this is a really good poem. Keep writing!

on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:06 pm
.riley.bonjour.la.freek. GOLD, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about where you are, it's about who you are. -Riley (me)
do you remember when you were four, and everything was possible? I remember those days, but dang, i gotta get back to reality. -Riley (me)

Thanks! (:

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I really like this poem.  It's really well written. 


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