March 16, 2010
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Locked inside
behind my eyes
I hear a voice
that isn't mine.

Moaning, groaning,
under mental strain,
fading, slipping,
under dark terrain.

Falling, falling,
into the black,
never to surface,
should I head back?

Fighting, struggling,
my will giving way
under stark-raving madness,
my sanity decays.

Locked in siege of
fortified mind,
me or him,
one be bind.

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CKaye said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 8:06 pm
I love this. I know its cliche to say how true and real it is, but you have found a way to capture so much feeling in not that many words. This is an amazing piece of work. 
ApolloReign replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 8:57 pm
Thanks, CKaye! I suppose you're the first one to actually grasp this. :)
CKaye replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:01 pm
Well, dont feeel bad lol. No one comments on my work. Haha. But i dont really care, cuz i just want my work to be read. Its all about presentation : )
ApolloReign replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:03 pm
Yeah, I know what you mean. I just like for people to grasp the emotions and the meaning behind the message.
CKaye replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:05 pm
Exactly true. And you my friend, have a way to expose a lot of emotions in your writing.
ApolloReign replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 6:08 pm
Thank you. =]
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