Just Me.

March 16, 2010
I'm slowly dieing
I'm trapped within
My own fears.
Scared to speak
I'm Silent.
No emotion can
Show how I
Despair is taking
The happiness
Of my being
Is drained out.

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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 7:43 pm
This is really touching. The way you explain your emotions is in a different way than the norm. I like the ending a lot; it makes the reader wonder what happened. Nice work...keep writing!
beautifuleyess12 replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 11:42 pm

Thank you, again(:


Milo! said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:41 pm
This is really good! i really like how it flows and is easy to relate to. I hope to see more work from you! I would love it if you would read some of my work. I think you would like it.
beautifuleyess12 replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 11:41 pm
Thank you. I like how you think it flows. It's my favorite piece of work. I would love to read yours.
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