Just Me.

March 16, 2010
By beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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I'm slowly dieing
Inside.
I'm trapped within
My own fears.
Scared to speak
Out.
I'm Silent.
No emotion can
Show how I
Feel.
Despair is taking
Over.
The happiness
Of my being
Is drained out.


The author's comments:
This poem is about the sadness I hold within.
Note: That happiness should always be with you (:

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on Apr. 11 2010 at 11:42 pm
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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Thank you, again(:

 


on Apr. 11 2010 at 11:41 pm
beautifuleyess12 BRONZE, St.Cloud, Florida
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Thank you. I like how you think it flows. It's my favorite piece of work. I would love to read yours.

on Apr. 11 2010 at 7:43 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

This is really touching. The way you explain your emotions is in a different way than the norm. I like the ending a lot; it makes the reader wonder what happened. Nice work...keep writing!

Milo! said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:41 pm
This is really good! i really like how it flows and is easy to relate to. I hope to see more work from you! I would love it if you would read some of my work. I think you would like it.


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