when shes gone

March 16, 2010
By CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
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When shes not here I can't breathe
But when I close my eyes I can see
See her face lit up so bright
Like a mid-day sky
I remember us entertwined
Where no one could find
Us
All we can feel is each others touch
Theres no need to rush
This passion between us
Everything will come in time
Just keep that in mind

The author's comments:
This is just a random piece of writing that I came up with just sitting in class thinking about a girl

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CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 1:36 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
15 articles 0 photos 26 comments
thanks for the feedback. :) glad you could relate to it.  I'll be sure to check out some of your stuff.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:47 pm
This is really good! i really like how it flows and is easy to relate to. I hope to see more work from you! I would love it if you would read some of my work. I think you would like it.


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