Unthinkable

i love to see you laugh,
love to see you smile.
i hate to see you mad,
and also to see you sad.
i hate to see you down,
and hate to see you frown.

I try to make you feel better,
I try to make you smile.
It breaks my heart when you leave,
I hate to be separated by the.

There is no way to end this rage...
I just wish it would go away.
I feel like there's nothing left,
A minute feels like an eternity.

When i'm with you i feel complete,
When were apart i feel like broken glass...





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Milo! said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 9:43 pm
This is really good! i really like how it flows and is easy to relate to. I hope to see more work from you! I would love it if you would read some of my work. I think you would like it.
 
Darkness.Arising replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 1:20 pm
thank you i will take a look at your work
 
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