love sucks

March 15, 2010
You told me you loved me then broke me
while my heart was getting put back you madeit fall
i thought you loved me like you used to but i was wrong
"im sorry but we cant be together" were you lastwords love sucks but we have ti go through it <3

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CallMeFelix said...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 7:51 pm
I agree with boosflash, but it was not bad, however it would be better if you added a little more substance and a little something...different, you know? Keep writing! =)
A.Dreamer said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:38 pm
This is so true, especially the last two lines. And I agree with your side comment.
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:29 pm
I liked this. I agree you could have stated it a bit better, but it was still a good poem, pretty good flow, I like the message.  Good job.
just.me_899 said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:28 pm
the ending line's so true...good workk
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2010 at 9:26 pm
you said comment on your work so here goes the monkey---this sounds like alot of other stuff i've read on teeink-"you said you loved me but you didnt you broke my heart and now i'm hurt. but we have to go through it".-not very poetic. sob stories-not poetry. you need a creative way to portray your emotions in a poetic form so the reader doesnt go-"just another sob story". my humble honest fluffy opinion.
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