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Beauty is love, from the heart
Beauty is love, from a mother
Beauty is love, to live for another
Beauty is love, to give happiness to each other

Beauty is family, life’s greatest blessing
Beauty is family, being with your loved ones
Beauty is family, like a forest of trees
Beauty is family, hugging and feeling free

Beauty is character, it’s who you are
Beauty is character, nice or mean
Beauty is character, messy or clean
Beauty is character; it’s how you’re seen

Beauty is dreaming, reaching for the stars
Beauty is dreaming, using imagination
Beauty is dreaming, the biggest motivation
Beauty is dreaming, creating inspiration





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XnoXotherXexit said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 10:25 am
I think that this is interesting.  Your use of rhyme pattern is pretty cliche.  But the repetition of the first "beauty is..." line was very clever pertaining to the topic.  The structure and order of the love, family, character, and dreaming were very well organized.  It definitely is true to life.  Great job
 
ABrownieC said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:24 pm
THANKS EVERYONE SO MUCH FOR ALL OF YOUR COMMENTS!  THEY MEAN A LOT!  I HOPE YOU HAVE TAKEN A GOOD MESSAGE FROM MY POETRY!
 
mooomoooo said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:24 pm
it has a great meaning of love beutty and who u r as a person
 
ABrownieC replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:25 pm
thanx!  That was what i was going for!  It is exactly what I was trying to get through to the reader, and I guess it worked!!!!!!!
 
AjRoCkS said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:10 pm
This is different, yet interesting.  nice job
 
ABrownieC replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:24 pm
thanx for the support!
 
milly said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:45 pm
I think its really meaningful. I like it. Keep it up!
 
ABrownieC replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:46 pm
Thanx a lot!!!
 
HPluvrxoxo said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:32 pm
this is rly nice.  i like the theme for it.  i especially like the character and dreaming stanzas.  it is a very "beautiful" piece. :P
 
ABrownieC replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:35 pm
Thanx!!  I really want people to feel that beauty is more than just what is on the outside!  This poem may be considered a bit amateur, but the meaning behind it is what I focused on!!
 
PopTart90 replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:13 pm
i agree.  it is SO true, in this society we liv in 2day.  Ppl only judge others by wha tis on the outside.  and i luved the ending.  it was vry pretty!  more true works like this can change the world!
 
SG123456 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:29 pm

I think this is really beautiful.  You really exhibited an honest piece of poetry, and i agree with your thoughts on "beauty".  Thank you somuch for posting this!  I will share it with my class


 
ABrownieC replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:36 pm
Thanx so much!  I'm glad you liked it.  I thought pretty hard about this one, and I created it.  And tell your class I hope they learn something from this!!!
 
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