A bright young woman on her way, on her way to riches and prosper, but also death and despair. The death of a mother and a father. The curse of the undead. Come little ones and old alike listen as my tail unfolds the tail of the immortal soul.
Medina D. is this the introduction to your book? i love the title, and reading this really makes me wanna read your book-----its all intrigueing. Just a little advice: if its a poem, just write it in stanzas, it really sets the effect. Take the first 2 lines: you could write it like this
A bright young woman on her way/
On her way to riches and prosper/
but also death and despair
it makes readers pause between each line and it makes it seem more dramatic... (more »)
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