Immortal Soul

March 14, 2010
By queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Things aren't always what they seem.


A bright young woman on her way, on her way to riches and prosper, but also death and despair. The death of a mother and a father. The curse of the undead. Come little ones and old alike listen as my tail unfolds the tail of the immortal soul.


The author's comments:
It's the inspiration for the book i'm writing called Immortal soul

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on Apr. 28 2011 at 10:42 am
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Things aren't always what they seem.

i  might post it jest keep and eye out XD

on Apr. 22 2011 at 1:56 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

is this the introduction to your book? i love the title, and reading this really makes me wanna read your book-----its all intrigueing. Just a little advice: if its a poem, just write it in stanzas, it really sets the effect. Take the first 2 lines: you could write it like this

A bright young woman on her way/

On her way to riches and prosper/

but also death and despair

it makes readers pause between each line and it makes it seem more dramatic. You dont HAVE to take my advice, but it is a suggestion. Are you going to post your book on teenink? I'd love to read it!! :D





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