Immortal Soul

A bright young woman on her way, on her way to riches and prosper, but also death and despair. The death of a mother and a father. The curse of the undead. Come little ones and old alike listen as my tail unfolds the tail of the immortal soul.





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Medina D. said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 1:56 pm

is this the introduction to your book? i love the title, and reading this really makes me wanna read your book-----its all intrigueing. Just a little advice: if its a poem, just write it in stanzas, it really sets the effect. Take the first 2 lines: you could write it like this

A bright young woman on her way/

On her way to riches and prosper/

but also death and despair

it makes readers pause between each line and it makes it seem more dramatic... (more »)

 
queentabbiecat99 replied...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 10:42 am
i  might post it jest keep and eye out XD
 
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