March 14, 2010
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Days go by of my life
as I please my immortal father.
A life spent following His word.

In the sanctuary, vows led by His
mortal child make a marriage.
Children named after those in
my Bible are born.
We never miss a day of worship,
and I devote my life to Him.

Yet, He tests me, and I fail.
"You shall not lie with a male
as one lies with a female"

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Yvaine_96 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2010 at 7:03 am
no way i dnt think its offensive or anything. Its hiow u feel and i believe dat people hav da right to speak deir mind. oh n thnax 4 reading my wrk n ya it ended quickly, but dats bcuz its a short story. Im taking it easy now n i'll post the first chap of da novel im workin on later. ur right, age dont matter when writing, but the thing is, no body wants to read the works of a 13 year old. The first thing they think is "Ok dis is going 2 be stupid cuz its done by a child" So thats why i feel pre... (more »)
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