Questions of My Mind

March 13, 2010
By choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken


Please tell me:
Why do you leave me
Why don't you tell me whats going on
Why am I sad
Why do you hurt me
Why do you force me to do these things
Why are you running away

Is it something I said
Is it something at home
Is there anything I can do
Is it an addiction
Is your parents hurting you

Am I doing something wrong
Am I hurting you
Am I being crazy

Then why do you keep on ignoring me
Please explain your reasoning to me
Because I'm so confused right now



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on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:36 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thanks. i wasn't really thinking about the grammar. check out some of my other stuff on here

Oracion SILVER said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 4:53 pm
Oracion SILVER, Muskogee, Oklahoma
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fiction's not much different from Reality, sometimes people just forget to look for the magic in their own lives

Oh, as always, a great bit of poetry. I think that first line is just perfect. It's good that  can't find much problem with it so I'm gonna be a grammar snob with the "is your parents hurting you". I know poetry shouldn't have restrictions but it just sounds weird. Other than that, awesome!

 





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