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Questions of My Mind

Please tell me:
Why do you leave me
Why don't you tell me whats going on
Why am I sad
Why do you hurt me
Why do you force me to do these things
Why are you running away

Is it something I said
Is it something at home
Is there anything I can do
Is it an addiction
Is your parents hurting you

Am I doing something wrong
Am I hurting you
Am I being crazy

Then why do you keep on ignoring me
Please explain your reasoning to me
Because I'm so confused right now



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Oracion said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 4:53 pm:

Oh, as always, a great bit of poetry. I think that first line is just perfect. It's good that  can't find much problem with it so I'm gonna be a grammar snob with the "is your parents hurting you". I know poetry shouldn't have restrictions but it just sounds weird. Other than that, awesome!

 

 
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Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:36 pm :
thanks. i wasn't really thinking about the grammar. check out some of my other stuff on here
 
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