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You were there
in the beginning.
You taught us all how to love
and cherish every moment
of our gifted lives

Though you are no longer around,
you still are.
You live in me every day
of my life.

I am overly-proud to call
myself a relative of yours.
I've obtained much of my
coherent knowledge because of
your practical, logical, facetious words

I know you're always watching,
so I can freely say
that your presense is not
physically with us, only spiritually and lovingly, deep in our hearts,
never far from our thoughts

Your light will continue to live on in us all because you are
my dreamer,
my guardian angel,
My Fighter




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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 7:04 am:
Very beautiful and touchingg! Just be careful with punctuation, but other than that great job!=] Check out my work and tell me what you think!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 11:08 am :
thankk u very much 4 da feedback and i'd luv 2
 
xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:48 pm :
you're welcome and thanks i appreciate all kinds of feedback =]
 
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BleedingRose said...
May 17, 2010 at 11:10 am:

This is a very touching piece, I can completely connect here.  Very . . . emotional, (I'm in need of a better word) because it totally changed my mood, but not in a bad way.  I a happy-sad-ness kinda thing, you know?  You have talent.

-Rose

 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
May 17, 2010 at 5:48 pm :
aww thankkk u it really meanz alot. i luv ur work as well ;)
 
BleedingRose replied...
May 19, 2010 at 9:50 pm :
your welcome!  ;)
 
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xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 1:24 pm:

Hey, my bud,

Sooo much more of my stuff went on. 5 more pieces.

"A Smile"

"A Perfect Night"

"Love."

"Precious Love"

"Bookworm"

Check 'em out plzzz.

 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 3:01 pm :
sureee id luv 2 ;)) none of mine have but if they do, plz check em out.
 
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xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:40 pm:

awwww too cuuuute

that's sweet. i'm sure he'd be proud <3

 
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