Daydream

March 19, 2010
By LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg


I’m tired of being tired and I’m tired of no inspiration in my eyes.
Because I can see it all so clearly but I cant touch it and that is torture.
But its beautiful so I crawl at it again.
Sandy lines and fragrant trees are behind my eyelids.
They keep me occupied and asleep.
Hazy and comatic.
Like a slurry dream, and oceans of sleep, keeping me breathing heavy steam.
But I keep on and I keep on again.
Because Fake rules are better then reality.



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on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:49 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg

thank you so much! :)

on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:49 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg

thanks!...

on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:49 pm
LiquidSky PLATINUM, Libby, Montana
20 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
-Carl Sandberg

thank you :)

on Apr. 8 2010 at 2:08 pm
i agree. this piece definately caught my eye. and i really enjoyed it. keep writing:)

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 12:41 am
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

I like it... it's different and interesting. a good read. :) great job.

on Apr. 5 2010 at 9:40 pm
Mr_Anonymous SILVER, Ripon, California
5 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...There's no defense
except all the errors
made..."

-Excerpt from "Claws of Paradise" - C. Bukowski

I love this poem.  It is different, and caught my eye immeadiately.


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