Maybe You Don't Know

March 19, 2010
Do you know how much it would hurt?
If you left? Killed
yourself?

Maybe you don't know how often I cry for you
how much it hurts when you run into the street,
hoping a car will hit you
the only thing stopping you, my arm grabbing
yours

Maybe you don't know how much I would miss you
how much it hurts when you tell me
goodbye, i'll never see you again
best friends forever
love you

Maybe you don't know how much I love you
how much we were meant to be
best friends for life
how much I couldn't live without you

Maybe you don't know.





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 6:25 pm
this is really good. 5 stars once again captain, well not really once-but you know....
 
iliketac0s said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 2:19 pm
thanks. i looked at some of your work, too, I liked a lot of them, you're a good writer.
 
iliketac0s replied...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 2:19 pm
meant to click "reply" to whisperer, must've clicked "new comment" by mistake
 
Whisperer said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 4:07 pm
this is simply amazing. i don't know how many times i've thought about this when my best friend was suicidal. you aren't the only. i hope we can talk sometime. good job. i really love this piece.
 
amazingkp. said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 7:54 am
Wow..that is really deep. I feel like i can feel her pain when i read this. Please check out( and comment??) some of my work too. Good job!! I loved it!
 
stephers said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:07 pm
wow...this is really deep...i totally understand...check out some of my work? (comment please?)(:
 
iliketac0s replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:33 pm
thanks, I'll go look at some of your work.
 
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