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You Said OK

March 18, 2010
By Lovely:) SILVER, Clarendon, Texas
Lovely:) SILVER, Clarendon, Texas
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Laugh as much as you breath and love as long as you live.


I told you, finally
After months
Of what you would call
Stalking
I told you
Finally
When I did
Tell you
You said
About time
But nothing happened
I waited
For a reply
But all you
Said was "OK"
"OK?" I thought
Later when
I asked you
To go to Prom
You said “OK”
Because all you
Say is “OK”
Yes and no
Are just to hard
To pronounce
I guess
Five years later
I asked you
To pack your bags
To leave on a journey
With me to Rome
All you said was “OK”
I told you
When in Rome
Do as the Romans
Some person said
You said “OK”
After Rome
Under a tree
In the park
You bent down
On one knee
All I said was
“OK”


The author's comments:
Please look at my other poems and stories and give me some tips! Oh and comment please! Tell me what you think.
=P Thanks!

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