In Your Eyes

March 18, 2010
In your eyes, I see hazel, blue, and green
In, your eyes, I see you smiling at me
I drown into the beauty of your glistening eyes
And dive into the embrace of your love
That lies there for me…In your eyes….
The way you look at me
Makes me want to cry
Salty tears flowing out of my own eyes…
Into a river filled with love…Just for You





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:26 pm
youre so positive and fluffy captain. i love the third line. you make it sound like you either are about to get married or are about to die. i do love the imagery.
 
_Elsy_ said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:44 am
this poem is great, ur really talented.
 
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 6:43 pm
Thanks so much!
 
_Elsy_ replied...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 11:38 am
can you check out some of my stuff?
 
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 6:30 pm
sure! i will ;]
 
heena222 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:36 pm
this poem is so awsome!!!!!!!!!Hope u win!!!!!!!!!!
 
Daha123 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:57 pm
I love this poem !!!!!!!
 
#1 Panda Lover said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:46 pm
OMG!!!! I <3 it u r soooo talented and one of my best friends. keep on writing these awsome poems
 
#1 Panda Lover replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 5:43 pm
Love You TOO!!!! <3 <3 <3 :)
 
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