I looked for a star *

I looked for a star….
That is as beautiful as you are
I searched all day and searched all night
To find that light that shines so bright
You twinkle no matter how dark times get
And you tell me to never fret
You’re always there to shine down on me
And to surround me with your delicacy
I wish upon you all the time
For that is why I wrote this rhyme
I miss you when I can’t see you
You can’t imagine the pain I go through
So I looked for a star
As beautiful as you are
But I never found one…….





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Jule92xc said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 11:44 am
Good job! I really like this!
 
starlight26 replied...
Nov. 27, 2010 at 10:42 am
Thank you!
 
myworld10 said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 12:58 pm
Btw, I have read a few of your other poems. You are soooo talented! :) Keep it up.
 
starlight26 replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 11:34 am
Thank you :)  I'll be sure to look at your work as well!
 
myworld10 said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:46 pm
I like this poem too, not only cause of what it says, but bec ause I can kind of relate to it. Every night, especially during the spring, there is this one star that apprears in the night sky. i'd secretly go to the window, and make a wish. Whenever it isn't there I'm liike "where did you go, buddy?!?" Does anyone else do this?
 
starlight26 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 11:22 am
Thanks! And yes, I do that sometimes...I think that stars are so beautiful, especially when there are enough to light up the night sky :)
 
myworld10 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 12:56 pm

Stars are beautiful, especially during the winter(for some reason..lol). I absolutely CANNOT imaginr the night sky without the stars that twinkle so....it would be just like a dark, boring ceiling(except the moon).

You should write a poem about shooting stars.

 
starlight26 replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 11:41 am
I agree !!!!!  I think I will write a poem about shooting stars... I would have a lot to write about :p
 
myworld10 replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 4:31 pm

YOu are like the very 1st person I have "talked" to about looking at the stars secretly at night...lol....it's nice. :)

Abotu the shooting stars-Ok, it may be a lot, but you can do it. Try looking at them, first of all, and, of you get any ideas, write theim down. Gather up your ideas/fellings?whatever, and write a poem. These are my suggestions. I hope they will be helpful for you.

 
inksplatters21 said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 7:01 pm
wow.  very delicately phrased, which can be hard to come by.  great work.
 
starlight26 replied...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 5:51 pm
thank so much for reading!! :)
 
mary1992 said...
Jun. 24, 2010 at 5:51 pm

beautiful<3

this is simply amazing 

 
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 27, 2010 at 6:42 pm
THANK YOU!!!!! :)
 
SarahJumps said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 8:23 pm
your right- I do love this one too! :) its beautiful. 
 
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 17, 2010 at 7:56 pm
:) thx again !!!!!
 
shabam34 said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 8:31 pm
This is a great piece. Please write more ;)
 
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 7:35 pm

Thanks a lot!! I do have some other poems if you'd like: My Secret Place, In your eyes, and White Dove.

I'm really glad that you like my work!!! :)

 
TheSummoningFreak said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 6:18 pm
i love this, and yes i'm a total fan of the summoning book series i lvoe derek lol.
 
starlight26 replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 7:37 pm

I love him too!! lol Poor Simon.......

I was so dissappointed when I finished the series. I kept wanthing more!! ;)

 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2010 at 8:11 pm
this is great -i love it!!!
 
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