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i dont know whats going on,
but i cant help feeling this way,
my heart controls my mind,
and i with agony there i lay,

this is beyond my fears,
its something that overpowers me,
something that i cant control,
and to my heart you have the key,

i didnt want this,
and now i suffer day after day,
i walk by you with a smile,
but i dont get even a simple "hey",

im inpatient,
im losing my mind,
how do i know if what i feel is right?
how do i know if im who you are trying to find?

i cant take it any longer and so im gonna say how i feel,
but your looking at me as if what i feel is something rare,
as if love was from another planet,
and then i realize that you never really did care,

even though im deeply inlove,
ill have to deal with this pain,
it feels like the end of the world,
but this fight i must obtain

you will be a scar in my life,
but what i did i will never regret,
and my feelings for you are still strong,
even though im a little upset





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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2010 at 8:13 pm
this is wonderfull!!!! Keep writing!!!!
 
cheetoz replied...
May 25, 2010 at 1:13 pm
hey thankyou, ima take a look at your writing and tell you what i think nd thanks again.
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 25, 2010 at 3:46 pm
thup yet it thanks but its not posted yet-i have five poems that should come out this week though
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 25, 2010 at 3:46 pm
thank you but my work isn't posted yet-it will probably b this week or next week
 
cheetoz45680 replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 1:42 pm
but i read something of urs
 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 3:33 pm
thanks!! did u like it?
 
cheetoz45680 replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 7:21 pm

yeah it was really good

 

 
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 9:10 pm
thank you so much!!! that means alot!!!
 
cheetoz45680 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 6:06 pm
your welcome!
 
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