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Single's Ticket

March 12, 2010
By JohnO. BRONZE, Smithfield, Virginia
JohnO. BRONZE, Smithfield, Virginia
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I.

The tunnel of love is a lie.
I mean, come on.
It's just a tube with no lights
where if he tries to kiss you
he sometimes bites your nose.
One more awkward time in your relationship.
Minus one point for: Teenage Love.

II.

Your best friend told me; I know
that you let Corey Ward
sail through your "tunnel of love".
He really is a scummy guy,
but I understand.
Your defenses were down in the name of love.
It wasn't that important to me until you lied.


The author's comments:
Hatred stirs up dissension, but love covers all wrongs.

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on Oct. 4 2010 at 8:30 am
NonsensicalMuse PLATINUM, San Anotnio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing wrong with having your head in the clouds as long as you don't get altitude sickness"

"Perhaps you are right,perhaps not. I don't know 110% either way.All I know is that Im in search of truth. If you are too, let us be friends."

Interesting and heartfelt poem

on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:06 pm
KatstertheMaster SILVER, Like I&#39d Tell You ;-), Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't really think I need buns of steel. I'd be happy with buns of cinnamon."
Ellen DeGeneres

Intense. Very heartfelt though.

JohnO. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 5:12 pm
JohnO. BRONZE, Smithfield, Virginia
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Glad it finally went up.  Comments/ratings would be appreciated.