Someone's Missing

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I miss her.
I miss the friendship we used to have.
She spends all her time with him now.
Does she do anything else?
She’s changed so much.
I hardly know her anymore.
I wish she knew the truth.
If only she knew the reason why.
Unaware of how he used the girl before.
Clueless to his reputation with girls.
He’s bringing her down.
And blinding her to the truth.
I miss her.
But I don’t think she’ll be back.





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LivingMYLife said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:58 am
aww striker this is beautiful. so sad. i like how u put the truth in and dont lead urself on (ex: instead of saying "i hope she comes back" you say "but i dont think she'll be back") its not very happy but it makes it more honest. great job. i really like it. 5 stars
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:10 am
I love this:) It is so beautifully written and oh too true
 
LilaW This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 3:16 pm

Hey! I like this poem because its very relatable. :) I think most people can relate to this -- I myself had a friend like that.

The beginning starts out a bit slow, maybe find a better attention-grabber? Nonetheless, I like it :)

 
Striker replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 2:30 pm
Thanks for the advice.
 
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