Someone's Missing

March 19, 2010
By Striker GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
Striker GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is too short to wake up with regrets. So love the people who care about you and forget about those who don't."


I miss her.
I miss the friendship we used to have.
She spends all her time with him now.
Does she do anything else?
She’s changed so much.
I hardly know her anymore.
I wish she knew the truth.
If only she knew the reason why.
Unaware of how he used the girl before.
Clueless to his reputation with girls.
He’s bringing her down.
And blinding her to the truth.
I miss her.
But I don’t think she’ll be back.



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on Nov. 26 2011 at 12:58 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

aww striker this is beautiful. so sad. i like how u put the truth in and dont lead urself on (ex: instead of saying "i hope she comes back" you say "but i dont think she'll be back") its not very happy but it makes it more honest. great job. i really like it. 5 stars

Striker GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:30 pm
Striker GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is too short to wake up with regrets. So love the people who care about you and forget about those who don't."

Thanks for the advice.

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:10 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I love this:) It is so beautifully written and oh too true

LilaW PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2010 at 3:16 pm
LilaW PLATINUM, Brampton, ON, Other
21 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live. Laugh. Love. Fight. Flight. Get it right.<3

Hey! I like this poem because its very relatable. :) I think most people can relate to this -- I myself had a friend like that.

The beginning starts out a bit slow, maybe find a better attention-grabber? Nonetheless, I like it :)





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