Monster

March 19, 2010
By Alissarose PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
Alissarose PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Roses are red, violets are blue. My rose is white and its bleeding for you..."


You tell me a lot of lies.
You tell me what you think of yourself.
It makes me sad.
It makes me angry,
That you can’t see for yourself.
I wonder if I am the cause of those thoughts.
You say you’re a monster.
I say you’re not.

I say in all truth,
For I cannot lie to my love.
To me you are everything.
You are a hero,
A pure hearted gentleman.
You are so tough and strong,
Yet you are so kind and loving.
But I see no monster.

I say with all my heart,
That I see through the veil you put up.
I see a true soul.
It has no false lusts or desires.
It has no false meaning.
I can only see the angel sent from heaven,
Who now stands before me.
But I still see no monster.


The author's comments:
To my dearest and truest, for eternity we'll be together.

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on Apr. 16 2010 at 11:38 am
Alissarose PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
23 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Roses are red, violets are blue. My rose is white and its bleeding for you..."

I would love to check out your work <3

on Apr. 16 2010 at 11:36 am
Alissarose PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
23 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Roses are red, violets are blue. My rose is white and its bleeding for you..."

Thank you. Honestly, I don't think my writing is that good but when you have a good inspiration i guess anything is possible. I would love to check out your stuff. <3

on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:28 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I wrote something like this with the whole angel/monster thing. (I havent submitted it yet. (: I have to find it.)  Can you check out some of my work? I would love your comment. :)

Milo! said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:44 am
This is really good. It’s easy to relate to, and interesting to read. Keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.




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