Gone why

The Roses are still red
The violets are still blue
But the hues of the flowers mean nothing without you
You went away and it was my fault
I look upon your picture and time begins to halt
Not being noticed is the worst kind of pain
and with my Neglect i sent you away
crying tears of sorrow and fear
i was as glib and empty as a headlight strucken deer
null and void of all your feeling
away from me you start your healing
A want to hold you one more time
Sadness i feel is just TO real





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munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 7:01 am
I really liked the start of this poem
 
Aloneinhappiness replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 9:16 am
Thank you Very Much i think it gets a Tad dark near the end
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 11:02 am
I luved it!!!! Good job
 
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