Gone why

March 12, 2010
The Roses are still red
The violets are still blue
But the hues of the flowers mean nothing without you
You went away and it was my fault
I look upon your picture and time begins to halt
Not being noticed is the worst kind of pain
and with my Neglect i sent you away
crying tears of sorrow and fear
i was as glib and empty as a headlight strucken deer
null and void of all your feeling
away from me you start your healing
A want to hold you one more time
Sadness i feel is just TO real





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munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 7:01 am
I really liked the start of this poem
 
Aloneinhappiness replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 9:16 am
Thank you Very Much i think it gets a Tad dark near the end
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 11:02 am
I luved it!!!! Good job
 
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