Haziness

March 9, 2010
By AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani


As we drive unexpectedly
As we strive strongly, gently
Find what was lost with this adventure
Talk out the fears with every puncture

Blind like wind and rain
Darkness the stain
On your heart
The pieces come apart

Look out wish
See the colorful fish
Like an ocean rainbow in the sky
This haziness makes you wonder why

Words pouring out on empty pages
You journey through dreams in these ages
Trying to get away from all the pain
As we drive in the rain

Blindly on an adventure
My heart beat races with every puncture
Like an ocean rainbow in the sky
This haziness makes me wonder why



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on May. 15 2010 at 11:01 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Yea Maya leaves great comments!:)That's cool though, I'm happy that it had an effect on you too!!!Thanks for commenting!!!:)I really appreciate it!:)

Sultana GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 10:29 pm
Sultana GOLD, Albertson, New York
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments
I agree with MayaElyashiv on this one, too. However, I felt like I was trying to find my way through a downpour of a storm in the darkness. I liked this a lot!

on May. 2 2010 at 11:26 am
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

Thanks!I'm so glad you like it!:)

Is there anything, you think I could make better?!


on May. 2 2010 at 1:55 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 196 comments
I love how hazy this is...reading it made me feel like I was walking through a fog or a mist (in a good way)! 




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