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She wants to be loved the way she loves
She wants to fly the way birds fly
She wants to be free like the lion
To live life and not cry

She wants to be just like the others
She wants to be different in her own way
She wants to believe in a good everything
And to her, here is what I say-

To be loved, that is how you fly
To be free, you never have to cry
Life is just a lesson, preparing you for your dreams
Feelings are God-given
You will soon learn what that means

When you love



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MentalBreakDown said...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 8:40 pm:
i like it =)
 
archery10 replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 5:11 pm :
nice poem, read mine!
 
JeanGrey replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 12:36 pm :
I did :) very good...i think i commented on it :)
 
I_am_a_major_idiot replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 10:29 am :
T I think I know who the inspiration was because I recognize some of the lines but who was it? and this was amazing
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 3:04 pm :
lol it was something you said one day that made me write this :)
 
all_boys_hate_me replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 6:04 pm :
I knew it just because of one of the lines in it
 
Smoochie_Cuddlekins_ replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 7:03 pm :
Omg i loved this T. It is so touching and meaningful (:
 
JeanGrey replied...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 7:03 pm :
Thanks!! :)
 
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