Tell Me

March 11, 2010
By Anonymous

He tells me I am beautiful and I am the only one.
He tells me I am amazing and he loves me so much.
I put my trust in him, I told him everything.
But what does he care if I am hurting?

Makes it all the more reason to
Go flirt with them.
Give them more attention,
let them soak it up,
You stupid boy.

If its me you want,
Your going to have to work harder.

I know we are in hiding,
And that our love is a secret.
But that is only for our own good.

If they knew they would
target you
And take you too.

They would take you like they took my life.
On that fretful day,
I have never been the same since.

They have me hurt enough in these past two years,
To last me a lifetime.
And I don't need any scars
On my heart from you.

I never really liked you,
like you liked me.
But it was your sweet words,
That brought me
Down on my knees.


My heart was soaring,
For a while there,
Until I found out,
What you did today.

You are the one who pursued me,
So tell me,
When are you going to stop?
I am your girlfriend, not her.

I told you they hurt me.
I told you what they have done.
I thought you would be on my side.

You stupid, stupid boy.

So tell me,
How bad do you want my love?

Cut your ties
With those savages,
And pick up the pieces of my heart.

Those pieces are too heavy,
Too complicated to put back together,
Aren't they?

It's okay.

I knew you where never the boy for me in the first place.


The author's comments:
My boyfriend has been flirting with some of my "so-called-friends" latley, which of whom I specifically told him have hurt me in the past. I hope I can relate to girls who have had the same experience with there boyfriends.

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on Apr. 2 2010 at 1:22 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

O.M.G.OMG.OMOMGOMG!!!!!! awesome poem! i totally went thru this too nd i love the ending! so much lov...but yet so much hate !wowowow! awesome..keep riting girl!

on Apr. 2 2010 at 9:06 am
NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Reason is powerless in the expression of Love.~ Rumi
Realisim, in painting, is what one wants to see, not what they really see. ~ Janet Fish

OMG! It's like we're all going through the same thing! but, i have an acctual BF and an internet BF I like the one on the internet better. He acctaluy paid attention to me... =,(

on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:24 pm
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER, Excelsior Springs, Missouri
7 articles 3 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its going to hurt, before it feels better. Trust me.. Its worth it.

Truely amazing.

and sadly i know exactly how you feel. my ex boyfriend of 17 months started flirting with all my friends and no matter how much i said it hurt, he kept on.

Just like you said::

stupid, stupid boys.


GiSELA SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 6:25 pm
GiSELA SILVER, Escondido, California
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Favorite Quote:
Life is about doing things people said you couldn't do.

Wow good job!(:

Made complete sense.

Very strong and complete.

Makes you wonder why why?

and i could totally relate to it and im sure others did too(:

i tagged this one a favorite(:


on Apr. 1 2010 at 3:23 pm
josiebelle SILVER, Waterford, Other
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this really told a story i like that and a good strong ending!

on Apr. 1 2010 at 11:14 am
decembersun14 PLATINUM, Winchester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. A lot. But you just have to keep on going. No matter what happens. You can never ever give up. You just have to roll with the punches, go with the flow, and always try your best to keep on going <3"

This poem was amazing. So deep and well written. It really told a story. Thankyou for writing it :)

on Mar. 31 2010 at 6:08 pm
GabeLikesCandy BRONZE, Salem, Ohio
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This is a strong message.

It opened my eyes to some things I didn't realize about my own self.

I'd like to thank you for writing this poem. :]


on Mar. 31 2010 at 3:24 pm
yesimdarrian101 BRONZE, Millville, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything may not be perfect, but at least we tried." Stephen Jerzak/Chase Coy

It's amazing how much this relates to me(:

on Mar. 31 2010 at 2:53 pm
Khia_A. PLATINUM, Sicily Island, Louisiana
34 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay who you are no matter what you face along the way.

wow i know how you feel. been in the same situation with my ex-boyfriend. He flirted with girls he knew i was cool with and still does even though we are not together.

Metree SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 11:57 am
Metree SILVER, Machipongo, Virginia
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This is soooooo good! I love how you fight back and how you're strong about it and "i don't need you, you're nothing without me, who do you think you are?"

on Mar. 31 2010 at 10:20 am
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Wow this is really good! i like the ending


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