Tell Me

March 11, 2010
By , Warrenton, VA
He tells me I am beautiful and I am the only one.
He tells me I am amazing and he loves me so much.
I put my trust in him, I told him everything.
But what does he care if I am hurting?

Makes it all the more reason to
Go flirt with them.
Give them more attention,
let them soak it up,
You stupid boy.

If its me you want,
Your going to have to work harder.

I know we are in hiding,
And that our love is a secret.
But that is only for our own good.

If they knew they would
target you
And take you too.

They would take you like they took my life.
On that fretful day,
I have never been the same since.

They have me hurt enough in these past two years,
To last me a lifetime.
And I don't need any scars
On my heart from you.

I never really liked you,
like you liked me.
But it was your sweet words,
That brought me
Down on my knees.

My heart was soaring,
For a while there,
Until I found out,
What you did today.

You are the one who pursued me,
So tell me,
When are you going to stop?
I am your girlfriend, not her.

I told you they hurt me.
I told you what they have done.
I thought you would be on my side.

You stupid, stupid boy.

So tell me,
How bad do you want my love?

Cut your ties
With those savages,
And pick up the pieces of my heart.

Those pieces are too heavy,
Too complicated to put back together,
Aren't they?

It's okay.

I knew you where never the boy for me in the first place.

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lostnhim said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 6:52 pm
This is great Fall! You have talent, and im actually going to go read all your other stuff now.... (: Im sorry that this guy hs been a jerk to you. Guys are really stupid. They dont know what theyve got, and then... Its gone, cause they were too stupid to realize it!
Bummble_Be3 said...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 1:49 pm

WOW, idk what girl can not relate?

Amazing =D

torimcree11693 said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 2:01 pm
i love this poem to the ottom of my heart it is touching and i caan relate to it...keep writing and let ur heart soar with the winds.
together242000 said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 11:04 am

This poem is so deep. I LOVE it!!! It's one of the best!


xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 12:24 pm
Oooh, this is sad, but cute.. something everyone can relate to.
Nevada said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 10:46 pm
Isnt it funny how the people u trust the most hurt u the most
BleedingRose replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 11:12 am

I know right?  "funny" . . . But I loved this poem, very strong and touching, deep yet fresh.  Mind commenting on some of my work?  Keep writing!  5 stars


willowwinder1 said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:37 pm
My old boyfriend i caught kissing my bestfriend and i deid inside.
deardiary said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 8:17 pm
Usually, love poems make me want to gag. This one is most deffinitely an exception. I love ur attitude :p
iliketac0s said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 2:07 pm
wow, this is amazing. I thought the ending was especially good :)
poetry4life said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 10:21 pm

that is so down to earth and not just a lovey dovey poem


Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:28 pm

This is amazing!

I love the ending- it really brings you back down to earth with that note of finality. excellent job!!!

enchanted4yu said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 1:47 pm
Constructive critisism:I was kind of confused at the beginning of the poem the order of things or they way they were stated didn't really make sense to me but I loved the end. It flowed very nicely. My only suggestion is to maybe have someone read over it before you submit to make sure everything clicks! Overall, good job :)
Laughternchoclate said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 9:30 am
Wow! Already 17 comments! I agree with this, totally. I hope you can sort this out, or get over that jerk.
Angelkiss415 said...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 7:18 am
I love your poem all that happened to me at one time in my life. I can relate to your poem a lot. You created a good flow and I think you deserve better from him
Jose4Jesus said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 4:29 pm
:) I feel your pain. It says everything that ive tried to say in one of my poems. Doesnt it feel so much better when you write about it and move on? even if that takes time. :] nice.
humanity_vs._reason said...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 9:00 pm
You articulate yourself quite well, and your diction makes your writing relatible. Keep up the good work. :3
--DH-- said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 9:14 pm
OMG I LOVE IT ITS MY FAVE! and if my BF every did tht i'd drop kick him hard
Elle10 said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:42 pm

i'm so sorry, i know how you feel, or how i perceive you feel at least. it hurts alot.

your poem is exquisite though, i really like it.

redrose123 said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:11 pm

I love this poem.

im sorry you had to go through that, and sadly it happens alot to a lot of people

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