Tell Me

March 11, 2010
By Anonymous

He tells me I am beautiful and I am the only one.
He tells me I am amazing and he loves me so much.
I put my trust in him, I told him everything.
But what does he care if I am hurting?

Makes it all the more reason to
Go flirt with them.
Give them more attention,
let them soak it up,
You stupid boy.

If its me you want,
Your going to have to work harder.

I know we are in hiding,
And that our love is a secret.
But that is only for our own good.

If they knew they would
target you
And take you too.

They would take you like they took my life.
On that fretful day,
I have never been the same since.

They have me hurt enough in these past two years,
To last me a lifetime.
And I don't need any scars
On my heart from you.

I never really liked you,
like you liked me.
But it was your sweet words,
That brought me
Down on my knees.


My heart was soaring,
For a while there,
Until I found out,
What you did today.

You are the one who pursued me,
So tell me,
When are you going to stop?
I am your girlfriend, not her.

I told you they hurt me.
I told you what they have done.
I thought you would be on my side.

You stupid, stupid boy.

So tell me,
How bad do you want my love?

Cut your ties
With those savages,
And pick up the pieces of my heart.

Those pieces are too heavy,
Too complicated to put back together,
Aren't they?

It's okay.

I knew you where never the boy for me in the first place.


The author's comments:
My boyfriend has been flirting with some of my "so-called-friends" latley, which of whom I specifically told him have hurt me in the past. I hope I can relate to girls who have had the same experience with there boyfriends.

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on Dec. 6 2010 at 6:52 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is great Fall! You have talent, and im actually going to go read all your other stuff now.... (: Im sorry that this guy hs been a jerk to you. Guys are really stupid. They dont know what theyve got, and then... Its gone, cause they were too stupid to realize it!

on Apr. 10 2010 at 1:49 pm
HunterGirl_58 GOLD, Los Lunas, New Mexico
11 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If this is what it takes to get there. . . . then BRING ON THE PAIN!!!"

WOW, idk what girl can not relate?

Amazing =D


on Apr. 9 2010 at 2:01 pm
torim11693 SILVER, Bastrop, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
live the life you love,love the life you live.

i love this poem to the ottom of my heart it is touching and i caan relate to it...keep writing and let ur heart soar with the winds.

on Apr. 9 2010 at 11:04 am

This poem is so deep. I LOVE it!!! It's one of the best!

Joy


on Apr. 8 2010 at 12:24 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

Oooh, this is sad, but cute.. something everyone can relate to.

on Apr. 8 2010 at 11:12 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I know right?  "funny" . . . But I loved this poem, very strong and touching, deep yet fresh.  Mind commenting on some of my work?  Keep writing!  5 stars

-Rose


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on Apr. 6 2010 at 10:46 pm
Nevada BRONZE, Watsonivlle, California
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
So I'm grindin' with my eyes wide
Looking to find
A way
Through the day
A life
For the night- lil wayne

Isnt it funny how the people u trust the most hurt u the most

on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:37 pm
willowwinder1 BRONZE, Marshfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
Marilyn Monroe

My old boyfriend i caught kissing my bestfriend and i deid inside.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 8:17 pm
deardiary BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is a truth universally acknowedged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. -Pride and Prejudice

Usually, love poems make me want to gag. This one is most deffinitely an exception. I love ur attitude :p

on Apr. 6 2010 at 2:07 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

wow, this is amazing. I thought the ending was especially good :)

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on Apr. 5 2010 at 10:21 pm
emi-chan GOLD, Brownsville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
the world ended when you said nothing

that is so down to earth and not just a lovey dovey poem

 


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on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:28 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

This is amazing!

I love the ending- it really brings you back down to earth with that note of finality. excellent job!!!


on Apr. 5 2010 at 1:47 pm
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

Constructive critisism:I was kind of confused at the beginning of the poem the order of things or they way they were stated didn't really make sense to me but I loved the end. It flowed very nicely. My only suggestion is to maybe have someone read over it before you submit to make sure everything clicks! Overall, good job :)

on Apr. 5 2010 at 9:30 am
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Wow! Already 17 comments! I agree with this, totally. I hope you can sort this out, or get over that jerk.

on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:18 am
Angelkiss415 SILVER, Dewsbury, Other
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I love your poem all that happened to me at one time in my life. I can relate to your poem a lot. You created a good flow and I think you deserve better from him

on Apr. 4 2010 at 4:29 pm
Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
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:) I feel your pain. It says everything that ive tried to say in one of my poems. Doesnt it feel so much better when you write about it and move on? even if that takes time. :] nice.

on Apr. 3 2010 at 9:00 pm
humanity_vs._reason BRONZE, Hayward, California
2 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why should I be afraid of falling to the ground if its soil was the very thing that blossomed me?

You articulate yourself quite well, and your diction makes your writing relatible. Keep up the good work. :3

on Apr. 2 2010 at 9:14 pm
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Eat, Sleep, Sing (by me)
Writing is an art few people master it. -me

OMG I LOVE IT ITS MY FAVE! and if my BF every did tht i'd drop kick him hard

on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:42 pm
whatitmeanstolive BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
nothing is sound.

i'm so sorry, i know how you feel, or how i perceive you feel at least. it hurts alot.

your poem is exquisite though, i really like it.


on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:11 pm
Josephine SILVER, Omaha, Nebraska
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Remembering is always about some degree of forgetting. The task is to keep reminding ourselves what is worth remembering." "Help those who cannot help themselves and protect those who cannot protect themselves."

I love this poem.

im sorry you had to go through that, and sadly it happens alot to a lot of people



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