His. . .

His hair,
So amazingly cut,
Like a movie star.

His eyes,
So . . . nutty,
In a good way of course.

His smile,
Makes me freeze,
From head to toe.

His voice,
Is petrifying,
To a girl as love sick,
As me. . .

His face,
In my mind or in person,
Is hypnotizing.

He is my major crush.
His name is. . .
NOT TELLING





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soooooo cute!!! said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 4:02 pm
Wow this is so nicely written! I Love it!!
 
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 4:04 pm

this is soooooooo cute.

i think this piece is amazzzing.

good job. <333

 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:58 pm
thxs ur awesome <333
 
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:59 pm
aww this is soo cutee. i waznt expecting the last part @ allso i guess dats my favorite part ;)) it makes it all the more powerful. amazing job, u've definetly got talent!!!
 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:58 pm
thxs i LOVE this one
 
thoughtfulsoul said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:45 pm
I love this poem! I liked how you describe how different aspects of a guy can drive a girl crazy and I liked how you separated each description. Oh and the ending is cute :)
 
DHgirl replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:57 pm

thxs so much this is SO about my BF

 

 
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