when that felling happens

March 11, 2010
By Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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when that feeling happens,
i tremble at the knees,
my heart gives a major thud,

then with a diminutive chchchk,
he breaks my heart it cracks,
he keeps me falling constantly,
my love it travels crazily,
and though it may one day break a heart,
i one day hope he has an new start,

i feel as though i can hear my heart weep bloody tears,
i love you so much my love sweet dear,
what am i to do with this sorry excuse for a heart?
shall i tape it together?
and sell it for the cheapest,
am i your pet your lovely thing you can kick around and walk all over?
im sorry you are mistaken,
i will not be shaken,
by the fear you may incite,
some on else you need to entice,
for you whom i no longer belong,
listen to this poem it is truly from my heart.
from whom you no longer captivate.

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Sania GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 4:28 pm
Sania GOLD, Aroura, Colorado
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Sorry I haven't been on in a while, it didn't I actually wrote that before I even had my heart broken. Thanks for the feed back. ^^

on Jul. 20 2010 at 7:28 am
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I like it, the way it rhymed and displayed its point was very nice. It worked very well. Sorry if that actually happend dot you. People can be such jerks. Anyway, sweet job!


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