To Whoever it Concerns

March 11, 2010
By simply_bliss SILVER, Farmington, Minnesota
simply_bliss SILVER, Farmington, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to conquer yourself than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you, not by angels or by deamons, heaven or hell."
~Buddha


To whoever it concerns, I'm just a small town girl,
And to whoever it concerns, I don't mean much to the world,
I have hopes and dreams and goals, Just like anyone that you might know.

To whoever it concerns, I act like I don't care,
And to whoever it concerns, at home I will shed a tear,
I have scars from pain of the past,
But now I realize that pain will pass.

To whoever it concerns, you will never know me,
And to whoever it concerns, there are some things you can't show me,
Sometimes I won't listen, sometimes I will fight,
Sometimes I can push myself out of sight.

To whoever it concerns, I realize I'm not perfect,
And to whoever it concerns, I know I have some defects,
But I can't change for you,
And I definately won't try to.

To whoever it concerns, I try to wear a smile,
And to whoever it concerns, you'll never know when I'm in denile,
You see me as the strong one who always jokes around,
But look and a sensitive girl will be found.

To whoever it concerns, I was born free,
But to whoever it concerns, I'm still a prisoner of me.


The author's comments:
On a t.v. show I heard a poem somewhat like this, but none of the same words. I liked it and redid it.

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on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:53 am
simply_bliss SILVER, Farmington, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to conquer yourself than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you, not by angels or by deamons, heaven or hell."
~Buddha

Thank you so much:) I will be sure to look at your work:)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:54 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow this is amazing!! i love the form that you wrote it in!! this is really interesting and wow! you wrote this really well!! congrats!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!! it would mean a lot:)


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